Nice work Angel. I can see you get the idea with this explanation structure. You even gave two paragraphs! Next time it would be cool to see you coming up with a paragraph completely from scratch. You were replacing the topics in each of these sentences which is ok, but sometimes it's more fun to start afresh and create your own. Keep it up.
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Nice work Angel. I can see you get the idea with this explanation structure. You even gave two paragraphs! Next time it would be cool to see you coming up with a paragraph completely from scratch. You were replacing the topics in each of these sentences which is ok, but sometimes it's more fun to start afresh and create your own.
Keep it up.
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